| 2007-04-06 19:58:55 |
My Horny Aunt
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Almost unreadable. terrible prose; lousy spelling, poor story-telling ability.1/10. No more. |
| 2007-04-06 20:13:38 |
My Horny Aunt
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Stop fuckin shouting for a start. U sound more like an Indian or Pakistani than a Yank. Story concept was OK but thats all. |
| 2007-04-06 22:13:11 |
My Horny Aunt
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Theres a CAPS lock button on your keyboard for a reason... Fucking use it. |
| 2007-04-07 01:45:27 |
My Horny Aunt
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2/10 pretty good got me hard |
| 2007-04-07 06:32:34 |
My Horny Aunt
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Awful, awful, awful. Your writing style and overall presentation (mever mind the dumb all-capital letters) didn't do a thing for my enjoyment. Stop writing and get a job as a bus driver. |