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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-04-06 12:39:48 | No.1 Cousin | huh? wot was itt? iz itt over alreddy? good concept,piss poor relating of a great story. you need spell check,a little english lesson might help also! 5/10 thanx |
| 2007-04-06 14:54:25 | No.1 Cousin | You need an English class real bad. I'm sure this is the way you talk but that is too bad. Maybe you will improve in a few years. I'm not talking about your story just your English. |
| 2007-04-06 23:39:57 | No.1 Cousin | DUDE MORE PRACTICE I GIVE IT A 3/10 MAKE EM LONGER MORE DETAILEZ |
| 2007-04-07 10:20:46 | No.1 Cousin | Yeah, punctuation and spelling. Fix 'em. |
| 2007-04-07 13:53:48 | No.1 Cousin | I can overlook the bad English and horrible spelling but you shouldn't be able to write a story on the back of a post card.... way way way too fucking short |