| 2007-10-26 04:35:01 |
Star Wars The Choices We Make Trilogy Part 2: Aftermath
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Dude.. these two said it was good but.. Really you need to work on things more. It could be better. |
| 2007-10-28 00:51:33 |
Star Wars The Choices We Make Trilogy Part 2: Aftermath
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wtf no sex or tits or ass |
| 2007-04-10 00:34:11 |
That Young Filly
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Not a bad story, my only thing, this is a porn site, I think you can get away with saying fuck. |
| 2007-04-11 00:18:56 |
That Young Filly
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Ooops, the site where I orginally posted this story edited out the word fuck! Should have looked at that before posting it here! |
| 2007-06-03 18:18:36 |
That Young Filly
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Good story dude, well written, have you considered a part two? You should. 10/10 |