| 2007-04-10 15:21:57 |
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If you read the first chapter … originally that was the story. Becky fell in love with Tony due to the way he was, however also as he resembled her father so much. I received so many e-mails requesting the story continue, that I went on with it. I must say that it is difficult to admit but I care deeply about these characters also. Much more than I have with any others. Tony is much like the king, who wanted only to exchange places with one of his subjects so he could love and be loved by the individual of his dreams. |
| 2007-04-10 15:23:27 |
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All my years as a police officer, struggling with the dark-side of humanity, and as a teacher dealing with 7th and 8th graders and their new abilities and desires to harm other people, has not dragged me to a point where I feel people who read my work must suffer. All of my characters are a part of me, or a part of the guys and girls and children, I have met along the way. I have a picture of “Diane”, in my head and as she is fashioned after my own daughter Diane, I want only love and happiness for her … real or fictional. |
| 2007-04-10 15:25:49 |
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To “TSG” 04-10-07 - 12:15: In the past … somewhere, someone else asked me not to make this into a story where there is some type of painful ending. I believe Tony due to his less than handsome persona, and the fact that Becky and her love for him, snatched him back from the jaws of death … as it were, has made him into a better man ... which is all most women seem to desire. Since meeting her, his life has changed 180 degrees and he has found how much he wants to share his newfound happiness and wealth with others. I told the other person that I was brought up on Disney stories, and stories that ended with “Happily ever after.” |
| 2007-04-10 15:26:25 |
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OG...I am impressed with your knowledge of aircraft terminology. I, myself am a private pilot and was truly surprised to see you use the term 'pitot tube'. After reading your comments, I now know that you do have flight knowledge. Another great chapter. |
| 2007-04-10 22:29:16 |
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I almost didn’t write anything as so many people have written about your stories. I happened to read chapter three of this story. I then went back to the first chapter and started all over. I am now all caught up and just finished “My sister the Nun”. Next I’m going to read the “6 mile high club.” What is wrong with XNXX and why don’t they tell us about all of the different writers? Some of you are wonderful while others aren’t. Janey in New Mexico. |