| 2007-04-12 18:14:13 |
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Just found your series. It was well written, both the plot and the sex. Even though it was hard to find all of it. Creative, intresting, "I give a 10, A FUCKING 10!!! |
| 2007-04-12 21:52:02 |
harry potter 17 A New Beginning
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this not only had great sex parts but followed the story well good job i'm giving this a 10 |
| 2007-04-13 09:15:30 |
harry potter 17 A New Beginning
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i rewriting all chapters to make them longer and better, maybe fix some grammer i come acrossd, itll take a couple months but i will put them out all at the same time, im glad ppl enjoyed them i might do life after hogwarts or something, keep an eye out |
| 2007-04-15 21:42:46 |
harry potter 17 A New Beginning
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look this gets way too involved in a story line. It's just not hot. It's like a novel with some sex parts in it. On a site completely dedicated to sex, that's just not good enough. It needs more sex in it, and a much bigger focus on the sex. A story is okay, but it gets in the way in this case. Keep in mind the whole purpose of this site is to provide material for people to jack off to. This is not a place to post books. A Harry Potter site would be a much better place for this story. Good story, but not right for this site. To me this story is like writing an essay for english on a science test. It might be good in its own regard, but it just doesn't fit the purpose. |
| 2007-04-16 08:19:06 |
harry potter 17 A New Beginning
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no harry potter site wont take my stories, and this is the only site i get bad review, hmmm more perverts come here than everywhere else |