| 2007-04-12 18:03:13 |
Horny Cousins
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Fiction more like it ... |
| 2007-04-12 20:26:48 |
Horny Cousins
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born without lol good story though |
| 2007-04-12 20:44:08 |
Horny Cousins
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do you're a prick how was she born without a hymen. and why do all these storys on xnxx the girls squrit come on dude quit it |
| 2007-04-13 01:26:44 |
Horny Cousins
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This is fiction. Anyway.. it shows potential, try to expand your stories, take a little bit longer before the fucking 'n sucking; and remember, detail, detail, and more detail. Readers love that. |
| 2007-04-13 15:18:30 |
Horny Cousins
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good first try, don't give up, people on here like to complaing. keep working and keep writing some more. |