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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-04-15 11:58:26 | Not So Ordinary Life ch. 4 | I AM GOING TO TRY MY UNCLES BLAVK LAB I THINK MMMM..... il- pam |
| 2007-05-02 20:18:46 | Not So Ordinary Life ch. 4 | I think I'll go try my brother's german sheperd. "Strawberry" |
| 2008-01-20 11:34:07 | Not So Ordinary Life ch. 4 | You should proof-read your story in addition to running it through spellcheck. You used "too" when you should have simply used"to" and "...soar (sic) pussy..." and "...now..." when you meant "know", among other errors. If a word is spelled correctly spellcheck will NOT know that it is an error even though you are using it improperly in your sentence. |
| 2008-01-20 11:45:35 | Not So Ordinary Life ch. 4 | I don't know where you ae from, but in my state all animals are neutered BEFORE being put up for adoption. If you write on this subject again, use a dog purchased from a kennel or a private owner to make it realistic. |
| 2007-04-14 11:07:10 | Not So Ordinary Life ch. 5 | sa lut |