| 2008-03-01 21:06:56 |
Family Love_(3)
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it is hard to read you need to work on the way you write |
| 2008-03-08 11:11:15 |
Family Love_(3)
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whoever told you that you could write deserves to be shot 2-2-2-2-2-2-2-2-2 |
| 2008-03-14 23:48:09 |
Family Love_(3)
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I don't think the world is ready for your type of writing. When I see writing where youe use 2 instead of to, thats all it takes to turn me off to your story, I will not read it. I read the first paragraph and lost interest. I give you a 1/1 |
| 2008-02-12 12:34:51 |
Janet part 5 - Payday for a nasty girl
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wachhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh... |
| 2008-03-16 19:19:59 |
Janet part 5 - Payday for a nasty girl
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It carried on for three or four months you say? Personally I think this is one of the best series on the website and you should be proud of it! Please write some more stories about you and Janet! Maybe about shitting in lessons or something. Pleeaase write more! :P |