| 2007-04-16 19:33:25 |
Sandys Work
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Pretty good. But where is the rest of the story. Please finish it. |
| 2007-04-24 22:16:45 |
Sandys Work
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Finish the Damn Story |
| 2007-10-23 15:28:40 |
Sandys Work
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its like the author was jacking off while writing this story and he came at the end and just gave up and sent it in |
| 2007-04-17 14:32:49 |
Amy-Sue: Who Me?
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it was too long and took too long to get to the point and would have been a little better w/o all the mouse traps and other shit. |
| 2007-04-17 17:40:52 |
Amy-Sue: Who Me?
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tyvm for your comments it was actually three parts if you look carefully at the chapters but what the heck wanted to post it all at once. lesson learned. Keep in mind that one man's meat is anothers;s poison. |