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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-04-19 21:13:05 | Shelly Shocked | Sheppard~~ you one bad mother fucker!! in the next story but some black cock in that little blonde pussy!!!!! |
| 2007-04-19 21:19:14 | Shelly Shocked | I READ ALOT OF STORIES EVERY NIGHT BUT I ONLY PICK ONE TO READ WHILE I STROKE IT!! THIS ONE IS MY PICK TO STROKE TONIGHT!!! DO YOU HAVE ANY OTHER STORIES?? THANKS FOR THE STROKING MATERIAL!!! |
| 2007-04-19 22:53:35 | Shelly Shocked | Christ, dude. Try writing a story without the gay shit for a change. Ick. |
| 2007-04-19 23:08:17 | Shelly Shocked | As a storyteller: B+; I enjoyed the story, but As a writer: D; it's hard to follow some places, mostly because of run on sentences and lack of puncturation, especially important commas and quotation marks. As a teacher: F-. there is a difference between there and their, then and than; pronouns and verbs need to match; apostrophes needed at many places. Glad you teach history, not english. |
| 2007-04-20 00:09:29 | Shelly Shocked | SEXIEST TEEN CHICK I HAVE EVER SEEN IN ONE OFF THESE SEX STORIE SITE!!!! IF YOU KEEP WRITEING I'LL BE A FAN FOR LIFE!!! |