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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-05-13 01:23:26 | Shelly Shocked | dude aside from the homo gay shit it was good |
| 2007-05-13 08:10:56 | Shelly Shocked | good, but you really didnt need to explain the pun at the end! |
| 2007-05-13 14:31:15 | Shelly Shocked | Well it was ptrtty good story, though i dony like gay part much but ok. |
| 2007-05-13 18:52:36 | Shelly Shocked | The subject matter was interesting, but the writing was terribly difficult to read. I would have liked a little warning about m/m action, and ass-to-mouth is just plain gross, but the main thing that was bad was that the writing had absolutely zero flow. Dozens of short, choppy sentences in a row are kind of smothering. |
| 2007-05-13 21:47:21 | Shelly Shocked | The only bad spelling and grammar is from the peoples comments. I thought the story was great 10/10 |