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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2008-01-21 23:44:00 | Shelly Shocked | I liked it, keep up the good work. Need to work on your paragraphs, but otherwise great. 8/10 |
| 2008-01-25 15:22:50 | Shelly Shocked | Omg that was so hawt. Especially picturing you being fucked by a guy and a girl at the same time. Dont listen to the negative comments. They're entitled to their own opinion and ure entitled to yours. Good job, 10/10. Only thing, space out the paragraphs a little better to make it easier to read |
| 2008-01-26 20:55:59 | Shelly Shocked | I wont be number one for long, someone is logging in twice aday every day and rateing the story a one. i do have a part 2 comeing but i have to teach, keep up with shelly and not get caught by wife. leaves little time for writing while wife is asleep. however i believe its shapeing up to be far better then the first. you can find my other stories on nifty and even how to contact me. |
| 2008-01-26 21:08:01 | Shelly Shocked | This is the hottest bi story ever!! a beautiful young girl described so perfectly. a hot young stud to teach the teacher!!! best of the best 20/10 |
| 2008-02-01 13:28:01 | Shelly Shocked | Don't worry John some of us keep rating this as a 10/10. this is to encourage you to write again! (as soon as you can please). |