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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-12-04 15:04:58 | My Summer Boss chapter 3 | great story i can't wait for the next chapter to come out keep it up 10/10 |
| 2007-12-04 16:55:33 | My Summer Boss chapter 3 | first off, i really like how you are writing the story... great plot. Also, the incest part is not all that bad but i think it should be kept to a minimum and you should focus on his relationship between brooke and Eve.... But that is onlt my personal preferances. definately keep it up it is great to read!! |
| 2007-12-04 16:57:50 | My Summer Boss chapter 3 | they keep gettin better and better, keep writing em and I'll keep reading |
| 2007-12-04 18:17:01 | My Summer Boss chapter 3 | for the readers reading this page of posts, the writer had previously said there would be no incest and mainly it is to add to the conflicts and probably character developement in the story (the probably part was my interpritation) again, great story. and will you develope into the relationship status of him and eve/him and brooke? ie. Him and eve (and brooke) are more secretive while Brook is his girlfriend for public situations. But it is definately a good posistion to have as the writer, im assuming there are many options to take with this one... |
| 2007-12-06 09:22:33 | My Summer Boss chapter 3 | too late now. hes doing his sister. good stuff. possible foursome? or more? this guys my idol. |