| 2007-04-23 13:01:53 |
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relli good but how is he such a hevey sleeper. lol love it tho rite more plz. |
| 2007-04-23 13:25:44 |
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people are allowed to have their individual variances from the norm. //// |
| 2007-04-23 14:05:22 |
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Grammar gets a bit weird in places, but nothing outrageously incorrect. The stripping descriptions all sound the same. |
| 2007-04-23 16:27:25 |
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Great start keep them cumming |
| 2007-04-23 18:45:32 |
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I kinda think I would wake up if I was being fucked like that, but...good story anyway. |