| 2007-04-28 01:36:31 |
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Yawn. 4/10. |
| 2007-04-29 23:44:27 |
At The Pool_(1)
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thanks for the feedback guys, and the guys who say its unrealistic and whatnot, who cares, its a lot more likey than most of the bullshit that is posted on this website. |
| 2007-05-04 22:21:33 |
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nice story, but a little bit more would have been nice, but still 10/10 |
| 2007-06-11 16:01:47 |
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in the future i would use more pleasant words for description but other than that it was a satisfactory story |
| 2007-11-28 19:21:49 |
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penis |