| 2007-10-31 12:12:06 |
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Funny - everyone is wrong but you are right eh? Seriously you stupid fuck, you SUCK! |
| 2007-12-19 14:55:10 |
She wil learn
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Do you know what a paragraph is? You should consider breaking the story into paragraphs. And watch the periods. You used WAY too many of them. The story had no flow and really no story...i have to say, it wasn't very good at all. 1/10 |
| 2007-12-31 19:11:58 |
She wil learn
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that..... was.... horrible.... |
| 2008-01-06 17:21:37 |
She wil learn
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Hey here's a bunch of real assholes. Only one has the guts to sign in and leave a comment. And all the bad comments left here. Have the courage to put your name behind what you sat you fucking morons. I think this person is trying so I give them credit. Sign in lets see hao bad your crappy writing is, you bunch of fagots |
| 2008-01-06 18:17:11 |
She wil learn
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Hey I agree with the last comment. Anyone can make comments, But not everyone has the balls to show there name. Don't be a Pussy, if your going to say something sign in. So either sign in or shut your fucking stupid mouth |