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Date Story title Comment
2007-10-03 09:14:09 story of sarah i haven't read this story but i want to tell u something plz don't get disheartened by all the comments u heard or see coz u know it would be better if hear those coz they can be like lightning bolts strikin down ur head but if u can improve those pts. which u lack in according to the people who comments may be u could just be the best writer ever on this site.so GOOD LUCK nd don't get disheartened nd keep writin.
bye bye.
2007-04-28 12:15:03 All in a days work too short of sex. include more details. also make it clear which person is speaking either by putting the name up first or something. good job but not great. keep it up!
2007-04-30 10:03:29 All in a days work Good Story...you built up the beginning so the reader got an insight into how the two characters attracted each other, maybe the continuation will be longer with a lot more sex scenes in it!!!! Look forward to the next!!
2007-05-06 16:44:26 All in a days work Very horny indeed!!!! Can't wait for my next board meeting.
2007-06-05 16:52:58 All in a days work Well Johnl you sexy beast you!!!!
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