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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-04-28 23:22:41 | Daughter and Friend pt 7 | poor too much gay shit |
| 2007-06-10 11:51:27 | Daughter and Friend pt 7 | i like it better with out all the gay stuff |
| 2007-04-28 13:56:01 | Shopping Spree_(0) | This story has no flow. Try proof reading for basic grammatical errors like sentence fragments and subject/verb agreement. Format the story so that it has paragraphs. After you fix the basics, tell us why these hot chicks want to have sex with each other. If we just wanted fucking, we'd look at pictures. |
| 2007-04-30 14:20:17 | Shopping Spree_(0) | well when I orginally wrote this it was in a story with several chapters, so it might give it more meaning if I put all the other parts. Sorry this was my first time submitting stories and will try and fix it |
| 2007-05-02 13:38:50 | Shopping Spree_(0) | This is one of the most sexy.hottest stories I have read on here.I was so fuckin turned on...Yummy !! |