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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-05-04 21:12:48 | A HOT SUMMER DAY... | crap my ass! certain problems- do ur sums , but all in all a good story . not too bad for wat is perhaps ur 2nd language |
| 2007-05-24 12:27:45 | A HOT SUMMER DAY... | It was good. and you will get better over time |
| 2007-06-09 16:04:40 | A HOT SUMMER DAY... | Pure crap Crap my ass! certain problems- do ur sums , but all in all a good story . not too bad for wat is perhaps ur 2nd language |
| 2007-07-05 21:28:21 | A HOT SUMMER DAY... | too many spelling errors |
| 2007-07-30 15:36:55 | A HOT SUMMER DAY... | Horrible! Take a few English courses and a couple of writing seminars. You barely have command of the language! Learn grammar, punctuation, spelling and then try to write a story that makes sense. |