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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-05-01 05:24:55 | my wife and the neighbor | The moment I saw this uninterrupted, unpunctuated, unparagraphed piece of shit, I didn't even bother to read one single word of it. 0/10 |
| 2007-05-01 09:21:39 | my wife and the neighbor | story line ok, break it up some and learn spelling. one whole sentence is tough to read. try again. |
| 2007-05-01 11:52:35 | my wife and the neighbor | Take all suggestion from below and edit it, then re-submit youe story...... |
| 2007-05-02 01:03:36 | my wife and the neighbor | Took one look at the huge paragraph and didn''t even bother to read it |
| 2007-05-01 09:20:12 | Kalla: Ch. 1 | let me guess,you're not from iowa,right? sentence structure gave you away. sometimes hard to follow your phrasing and thought process. good story anyway. i'm ready for chapter 2. 7/10 thanx |