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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-05-04 04:22:23 | Nancy Nertured | This could be a very nice begining to a great series. Spell check only catches words that are spelt wrong. Read it out loud, it will slow you down and help you catch the typos. The grammer was off. Almost as if english is not you mother tounge. ( that would be a differnt kind of story). Please don't give up, as this is getting intresting. |
| 2007-05-04 11:56:42 | Nancy Nertured | very nice |
| 2007-05-04 18:04:41 | Nancy Nertured | i thought it was really too unrealistic, but a little interesting, what threw me off was the "spank her to death" sue is eighteen, not four, why would she have a moronic thought like that? Other than those few things, very good story. |
| 2007-06-07 21:14:25 | Nancy Nertured | Very good but had it's weak parts....8/10 |
| 2007-12-06 17:06:42 | Nancy Nertured | wtf |