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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-05-07 19:35:32 | New Year | not bad to be fair you've done a decent attempt. unfortunatly the build up bit you apologise for in the intro is probably the best bit. more detail =] |
| 2007-05-08 11:05:26 | New Year | not bad for a kid, add a bit more detail next time and you would make a good writer. |
| 2007-05-11 17:00:49 | New Year | dude..that was pretty damn good..it could definately use a bit of work but hey...not bad for a first attempt :) |
| 2007-05-07 06:06:33 | Allison's Uncle | first comment!!!! pretty good little short cant wait for the next ones though 9/10 |
| 2007-05-07 08:08:53 | Allison's Uncle | fuck matew give us moreeeeeeeeee |