| 2007-05-08 08:55:45 |
My Little Lady Jade
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I just loved this story and maybe now can see why u did this before Jade came in. I cant wait to read the next part. You are such a talented writer and also had me shedding a few tears after what happend to Kimmy. I also believe in that philosophy in life that to obtain something something of equal value has to be lost. Again good job and can't wait for part 2. |
| 2007-05-08 12:07:50 |
My Little Lady Jade
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If that was really your first attempt at writing then you REALLY need to keep writing. You have a gift that should be shared. Hurry up and post part two! |
| 2007-05-08 18:07:42 |
My Little Lady Jade
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Ok, I was reding this, and you have a talent, you should go out and become an actual writer, you really should, the elements are there. If you ever write a book,m put the name Jade of Kimmy in the title, and Ill go out and buy it, this was a great story, write part two soon |
| 2007-05-08 20:53:35 |
My Little Lady Jade
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Put together very well! Interesting way to see something! |
| 2007-05-08 21:03:26 |
My Little Lady Jade
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Very good , I've been there . lived with a lady but loved her little girl we were lovers too she was 13 but I know how you feel .I miss her very much. Dont know what happened to them |