| 2005-08-20 15:16:08 |
I Hate You
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I cried. That was so beautiful. The love scene so tender, so loving. I wish that I could have been Justin, to be able to have my Bryan. Please write more and more beautiful stories like this one. |
| 2005-09-09 17:01:53 |
I Hate You
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omg wow that was amazing i loved how it played out it was less sexual but oddly more interesting to read.... maybe sexual writing is less your thing i usually wouldn't read any romance story but hell if you had written it i'd probably have hundreds your a truly talents writer i mean seriously .... just wow! |
| 2005-09-22 21:14:35 |
I Hate You
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that was really good .you are agood writer but the story was missing some sexual feelings. write more and more |
| 2005-10-02 19:16:21 |
I Hate You
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wow.. it was a good story, but it dragged on. It need more sexual feelings through out it. |
| 2005-10-16 06:58:57 |
I Hate You
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god it was so great! I nearly pissed myself, it was beautiful :') |