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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-05-17 11:00:08 | The Dream? A Reality! | good story but bad erotica. either focus on one or the other by detailing either the story further or the erotica further. and never end with "but that is another story." |
| 2007-05-17 12:12:36 | The Dream? A Reality! | booooooo bullshit |
| 2007-05-17 16:26:16 | The Dream? A Reality! | Poor writing. Content seems to be bullshit. I have to agree with reader #1. Gave it a 2/10. |
| 2007-05-18 01:04:37 | The Dream? A Reality! | You sound like a guy I know. A girl says she wants to fuck him and he says he's too tired. What the fuck is with you, you supposedly fucked three girls including your sister and you don't care. And you keep falling asleep all the time. Are you on a permahigh or do you have that condition that you constantly fall asleep? YOU SUCK RETARD |
| 2007-05-18 02:49:55 | The Dream? A Reality! | I liked the basic storyline. This has the potential to be a great story. Sex, drugs, booze. Please describe the girls in detail and tell us about the sex. Don't rush it. 7/10. |