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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-05-15 10:50:20 | The Mark closure | Get real, women don't have Prostates, only men. |
| 2007-05-16 14:32:27 | The Mark closure | thank your readers for your input. Reader with the first comment. It had never occured to me that women didn't have prostates. And after doing the resarech that maby I should have done befor using the word I should have just said Anal cavity. Would that have made a difference? Reader comment #2. this story did happen. I tryed to lay out as best I could for you to enjoy reading about it as well as I did by being there. Weather you beleave or not is ok by me. I found it difficult to post my storie, make it enjoyable. And sound beleaveable, My story has been resubmited in a more anatomical format. and hopefully this one will be removed for the "new and improved version. |
| 2007-05-16 17:02:11 | My adventure with hubby | Wonderful story. Was much repetition--"Pressed her tits against his chest probably 7 times." Since it's a non-American writing the story, the author should get some help with the English. It's fine paragraph wise. The last paragraph is not necessary and should be removed or changed somewhat. There are too many climaxes--I know that women can shoot off quite frequently, but not men. I had a woman have 5 "minor" climaxes in about two hours to my one good one. Mostly oral sex--She is the cleanest woman I have ever been around. Could eat her out any time of the day. Gave this story a 9/10. Readers, don't knock it because of the poor English throughout. |
| 2007-05-18 01:31:17 | My adventure with hubby | ok |
| 2007-05-23 06:45:47 | My adventure with hubby | A very good story dont worry about too much about the comments your style will improve the more you write Well Done |