| 2007-05-17 22:21:53 |
The Thomas Household: Part One: (Eva and Kayla)
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Shit. You're right. I reread the story like 3 times, but now I see there are still some discrepencies of that kind. They won't let me edit it now, though, so I can't fix them. I don't think there are any dramatic switches, though, so if something looks wrong, it probably is. I'll try to be more careful for the rest of the series. |
| 2007-05-18 03:57:14 |
The Thomas Household: Part One: (Eva and Kayla)
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great, cant wait to read the next episode |
| 2007-05-18 10:04:29 |
The Thomas Household: Part One: (Eva and Kayla)
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wait like u bin wah kill the little girl or what |
| 2007-05-18 13:02:55 |
The Thomas Household: Part One: (Eva and Kayla)
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weird.... real weird.... where can i do something like that? lol i want tiny black pussiesss!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!... |
| 2007-05-18 16:27:02 |
The Thomas Household: Part One: (Eva and Kayla)
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What the Hell ??? |