| 2007-12-21 04:40:06 |
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something about the wording of the whole story just doesnt sit well with me. the subject is ok , maybe its just the whole styling of it. i do know that there needs to be more personalization of the char. try not to make "fucking" the only objective, it reflects a narrow minded writer. its still better than the other one though. 6/10 |
| 2007-12-27 10:53:36 |
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oh shit! this makes me REALLY horny...I think I justv cummed! I wish I had a big brother... ;D |
| 2007-12-28 02:26:50 |
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dude wtf its his sister |
| 2007-12-31 00:48:17 |
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Man One day imma fuck my brother hes only 1 year apart damn i sittin here rubbing my pussy extra fast and my tits have baby oil all on it by the way im a c cup man i really want 2 b a porn star am i makin anybody horny cuz damn ...shit i cummed all on my bed i guess ill sleep in it 2 night smells so fucking good i wish u guys could taste my pussy |
| 2007-12-31 14:28:19 |
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Someone should count the number of times "damn" was used in the story. |