| 2007-06-03 12:16:17 |
A Journey Of Excitement
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UNREADABLE |
| 2007-05-24 10:21:30 |
The Babysitter Brian part 1
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Have you not heard of full stops? commas? anything? There is not even a full stop at the end of the story! |
| 2007-05-24 11:22:48 |
The Babysitter Brian part 1
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Good story, but you should take an english class. |
| 2007-05-24 14:48:48 |
The Babysitter Brian part 1
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Jesus Christ, where is the punctuaction? I guess i better give you some. .............................. |
| 2007-05-25 02:10:33 |
The Babysitter Brian part 1
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5 out of 10. Migh want to use spell check next time. |