| 2007-05-27 03:07:28 |
Brooke_(1)
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it wasn't the worst one ive every read but defently needs more detial. lets up the next one is better |
| 2007-05-27 14:43:46 |
Brooke_(1)
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i agree, killed the mood with the kid |
| 2007-05-27 16:30:46 |
Brooke_(1)
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meh.. not crap but it cuold be better, more detail part two? oh and leve the kid outa this. |
| 2007-05-27 20:36:03 |
Brooke_(1)
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rhat story beats the hell out of bro/sis and dad/dau fuck tories anytime.. |
| 2007-05-27 22:03:25 |
Brooke_(1)
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i think i've read this somewhere before... |