| 2007-06-07 00:53:27 |
Cum Guzzler
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The story had a good base but was to jerky. take your time with the sex acts, talk about how smoth the inside of her ass or pussy is. Write in word and use spell check then transfer to here. If she took the Mares pussy juice and spread it on her own pussy she can get the stallion to fuck her. could have been a 7 but I gave you a 5/10 |
| 2007-06-08 11:28:19 |
Cum Guzzler
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it wasnt as good as some of the others on here, i mean it was alright, but yeah it needs more to it, try to make part 2 longer with more story line 4/10 |
| 2007-08-12 01:29:22 |
Cum Guzzler
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dammmmm ride tha horse wit no clothes then jackk off i lasted 2min it seemed like! then i got a b/j |
| 2007-08-12 01:29:22 |
Cum Guzzler
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dammmmm ride tha horse wit no clothes then jackk off i lasted 2min it seemed like! then i got a b/j |
| 2007-05-28 15:24:22 |
The three amigos
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Dude get this bullshit outta here. Ya'll never had sex yet but you fucked her in the ass while your friend is in her pussy she would have not went for that. Try again dude |