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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-05-29 17:33:15 | Harry Potter and the sexual Slytherin experiance | This story has a good storyline, but add more detail and it wont suck. As for Yami's note.... HEAR HEAR!! |
| 2007-05-30 21:14:25 | Harry Potter and the sexual Slytherin experiance | Rather than steal ideas from an incredible book, get some creativity yourself. Anyone who's read the book would find this as difficult to imagine as I did. Some decent content, but come up with your own plot. 5/10 |
| 2007-05-30 21:57:17 | Harry Potter and the sexual Slytherin experiance | Yami repeat after me: Woosah Now how do you feel? |
| 2007-05-31 13:03:05 | Harry Potter and the sexual Slytherin experiance | Lol yeah sorry to the good people that know how to actually leave a comment those other guys just bug the hell out of me. To c&c I know not very creative but I thought I said it earlier, if not sorry, but I just couldn't get this out of my head. and the the woosah person, stop watching Bad Boys II. |
| 2007-06-30 22:44:17 | Harry Potter and the sexual Slytherin experiance | I thought it had a good story line but more detail when you write another story. Keep writing. |