| 2007-06-05 00:41:12 |
My Very Big Brother
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The whole story is hot and sexy and all but the fact that your bro SUCKS HIS OWN DICK is fucking disgusting! |
| 2007-06-05 01:18:29 |
My Very Big Brother
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That was so hot, I hope you involve Gina in future. Please ignore the negative comments and keep writing. |
| 2007-06-05 01:21:49 |
My Very Big Brother
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Not bad. It would be a lot better with more paragraphs, and it would be nice to have names listed for the Gina/Danny conversation. But, overall it's well written, and I like the story. |
| 2007-06-05 05:48:32 |
My Very Big Brother
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wow! thats all im guna say! |
| 2007-06-05 19:10:03 |
My Very Big Brother
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Next time use spaces.... PLEASE |