| 2007-06-04 15:18:24 |
My Friend James 2
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Thanks Everyone!! Thank you very much CORY!!! I'm not just used to the idea that somepeople read stories that they hate and put harsh coments and rating. :"( |
| 2007-06-04 22:55:06 |
My Friend James 2
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Good story. Need to improve spelling and grammar, but keep writing. |
| 2007-06-04 23:23:27 |
My Friend James 2
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i put 10/10 twice -cory |
| 2007-06-05 11:31:51 |
My Friend James 2
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fucking brilliant, keep writing and the grammar and spelling will improve. nice to see some romance with the sex. good job 10/10 |
| 2007-06-05 16:11:25 |
My Friend James 2
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Thanks Cory and other readers!! |