| 2007-06-07 13:35:54 |
Las Vegas Lust
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sup man? good story. hoping it was a true story. it can sound like a true story. haha. i live in vegas too. 19 m here. |
| 2007-06-05 14:42:26 |
Janes humiliation
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Is the name supposed to be Craig or Graig???? |
| 2007-06-05 21:53:59 |
Janes humiliation
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Go on.... |
| 2007-06-06 11:43:07 |
Janes humiliation
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good story premise... but please man work on the dialouge set up and gram. good job. 7/10 |
| 2007-06-06 17:19:39 |
Janes humiliation
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i loved ur story but can u have them tied up more? |