| 2007-06-07 13:51:45 |
brother and sister part 1_(0)
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this would be a great story, but for the spelling, I'm not one for demanding perfect spelling but this is so bad I can't read it easily, and nothing kills a binner like stopping to correct spelling |
| 2007-06-07 17:09:00 |
brother and sister part 1_(0)
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Can anyone say, the author's family tree looks like a telephone pole. Drugs and incest, a mind numbing combination. Had a very good laugh though. |
| 2007-06-07 19:32:58 |
brother and sister part 1_(0)
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god what lousey spelling go back to school before writting any more stories |
| 2007-06-07 20:32:37 |
brother and sister part 1_(0)
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that sucked |
| 2007-06-07 22:08:23 |
brother and sister part 1_(0)
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god use spell check negative 50/10 |