| 2007-06-09 19:31:24 |
My Cousin needed help...
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Very poorly written; which made it difficult to follow... 2/10 |
| 2007-08-29 00:49:01 |
My Cousin needed help...
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OK cowboy, lousy writing, story works you got her ass by now |
| 2007-06-08 09:14:53 |
Janes Humiliation 2.
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Why do the first 4 paragraphs talk about Dawn but she becomes Jane in the fifth??????? |
| 2007-06-08 09:36:21 |
Janes Humiliation 2.
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How can a woman straddle something/someone and pull down her knickers later???? Don't think that's in the right order. |
| 2007-06-08 09:52:21 |
Janes Humiliation 2.
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I liked it keep going. More fucking and abuse to that slut |