| 2007-08-03 14:46:15 |
harry potter revisited 4,5,6
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bullshit dude. i hate to say it. u need much more detail alot more. descvribe the sex scenes. how big the boobs are and some other things. and u dont need 9 sex scenes. 2 or 3 should be good. You should revise this story. |
| 2007-08-07 20:00:19 |
harry potter revisited 4,5,6
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it was relly good 10 |
| 2007-08-09 19:15:43 |
harry potter revisited 4,5,6
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very good 10/10 |
| 2007-08-10 05:06:20 |
harry potter revisited 4,5,6
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There should have been less scenes and go with 3 or 4. More detail. Such as eating pussy all dat shit. Good story i will say 8/10 |
| 2007-08-10 06:02:43 |
harry potter revisited 4,5,6
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dude i thought that was mint .. alittle long winded thought too mant secne like ther other said 2 or 3 scence would of done nicely . a little more detail can go a long way8/10 from me dude |