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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-06-15 22:18:03 | The Poker Game_(1) | "don’t worry we won’t *rUn* out" not ran out Sorry you did that multiple times, irritated me some. But overall OKay story. 8/10 |
| 2007-06-15 23:18:08 | The Poker Game_(1) | ignore reader 22:18 they always try to find something wrong to say something about it. They should rate the story and learn to ignore the "minor" mistakes. I thought it was a good story line. 9/10 |
| 2007-06-16 00:02:11 | The Poker Game_(1) | good plot, but grammar mistakes made it hard to follow |
| 2007-06-16 15:56:46 | The Poker Game_(1) | Great story, i dont mind bout the grammer mistakes at all.. maybe you should make another story of poker ;) |
| 2007-06-20 13:44:54 | The Poker Game_(1) | Todays winner of the hypocrite's award goes to... fbailey Author 06-15-07 - 20:46 Your spelling was great but you need to proof read your work. spelling the wrong word corectly still doesn't do the job. |