| 2007-06-24 14:25:12 |
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hey people i am repulsed by it but i like cerson at u guys to c how u react and itn cracks me up so fuck off u wigger niggers |
| 2007-06-24 17:16:15 |
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Three Thumbs Up. It was majestically written and would do good if you can write a second one. Disregard the negative comments. Some people can't understand a good love story. |
| 2007-06-24 18:53:38 |
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Fantastic Story, 10/10. If only the girls had been a few years older then the story would have been even better. very creative and definatly not just an erotic story.
well done (awaiting the next story) |
| 2007-06-24 20:45:23 |
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i liked it. it took me 4evr to read tho. Can u get ur hands on a second one? |
| 2007-06-25 04:36:59 |
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10!!!!!!! |