| 2007-10-30 12:31:42 |
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That was disturbing too say the least!
U SMFLGF!!!! |
| 2007-10-30 19:34:15 |
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LMAO u posters are dum... u get turned on by a story involving youngsters, then probably out of guilt (for whatever reason) blame quinn... OMG DUMASSES he didnt even write the story... (read the 1st few lines) further more y call him a pedo when this story is labled under 'young'... u must all be retarded to read 4 hours worth of story, knowing what its about from the beginning, then still have the balls to call SOMEONE ELSE a paedophile, oh yea btw quinn, all ur stories ROCK ive read plenty of stories but have yet to find one as well written and emotional as yours... looking forward too the next part of the 'Jade' series |
| 2007-10-30 23:59:02 |
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Amazing read, took me 3 hours to finish, but it was spectacular, they were way to young though, maybe if you had made them about 15-16 it would have been great ;) |
| 2007-11-01 11:06:54 |
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THe story itself is amazing to read, but i agree that for avarage people the sex scenes, the girls are a bit too young. good written and it almost read like a book. only it would have been better if it was split in diffirent parts so that the reader is not forced to read it all in one piece i needed 3.5 hours while my computer begged for a update reboot. |
| 2007-11-02 16:18:43 |
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No f'ing way! This story was great! And the fact that these girls are ten only makes it better! "too young" everyone is saying, not taking the time to consider that it's FICTION!!! There is no such thing as a ten year old girl who can read minds or take such a mature/ sexual view of life. These were great characters in sexy bodies, the basis for any good erotic literature. Those of you judging the author so harshly should get a fucking brain, and remind yourselves that this is fiction. |