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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2008-02-29 00:51:03 | Locked out_(1) | I don't even know how old these characters are. The part with the mother was completely incoherent. It was very rushed, and not very detailed. Also, Mountain dew is bad. Sentence structure was ridiculously poor. "He.. he... He... she... They..." You didn't even make me hard. 3/10 for the effort. |
| 2008-03-04 16:06:07 | Locked out_(1) | I don't care what all the others say about the detail confusion and lack of. I thought it was pretty good. I say 8/10. |
| 2008-03-09 18:52:02 | Locked out_(1) | I thought it was good... 10/10 |
| 2008-03-23 06:52:35 | Locked out_(1) | urg. no detail |
| 2008-03-30 12:06:44 | Locked out_(1) | I thought it was pretty good. For the dumbass that doesnt know how old they were, it says they are fifteen. And mountain dew is delicious (: |