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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-06-20 16:29:13 | Helping Big Brother | Great Story. One of my Favorites. 10/10 |
| 2007-06-20 18:55:18 | Helping Big Brother | deffinatly write more stories dude that was a great one 10/10 |
| 2007-06-20 20:57:16 | Helping Big Brother | gd |
| 2007-06-20 23:02:42 | Helping Big Brother | Great start loved it, this is the first time iv ever posted, thats how good it was :) 9/10 |
| 2007-06-20 23:17:16 | Helping Big Brother | Not too bad. I enjoy reading authors that actually have a grasp of grammar and spelling. The writing was actually pretty good, but some of the details were silly. With all that moaning and groaning and screaming, they would have woken their parents *and* the neighbors. I'm not sure if plums are smaller where you come from, but I wouldn't expect to get a blowjob from anyone if that's how big my dick head were. The super orgasmic sister is a little cliche. Other than those details, the story had good detail and flow. It was very sweet the way cindy helped her bro, but I hope future stories don't turn her into a generic cum-bucket. There's lots of potential here. Thanks. =dreame... |