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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-09-05 09:16:48 | Mom Needs It | DAMN I WANT YOU AS A MUM |
| 2007-09-05 09:39:30 | Mom Needs It | Great story line -- A Spelling -- B -- Erotic content -- A -- If you tighten this through several re-writes, you would find spots to expand with a word, a phrase, a paragraph of action, etc. He repeats some unnecessary stuff, but I liked the line: 'I want to do this every day!' Using the 1st person was perfect. She is consistently horny and as narrator affected me. Do write one from his experience. Use his reticence and with the words draw the reader into the moment with its pent-up tension that he passes through, the barriers down . . . |
| 2007-09-05 22:34:03 | Mom Needs It | seriously? not raggin on you guys fantasies, i got em too but this just makes me lose my erection |
| 2007-09-07 15:31:00 | Mom Needs It | nice |
| 2007-09-08 10:29:46 | Mom Needs It | very nice.....by the way I did masturbated while reading it........ |