| 2004-05-26 19:03:14 |
Janet in Training 01
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Very, very well written. The details were well done, and I could imagine them throughout the story. Well done!! |
| 2004-07-21 14:16:50 |
Janet in Training 01
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Very good. |
| 2004-10-05 12:11:06 |
Janet in Training 01
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without a doubt the best i've read here. you got it all right! wish there was a 12/12 to vote on. don't stop writing. |
| 2004-12-18 22:17:13 |
Janet in Training 01
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It had good flow and anticipation. Perhaps there might be a bit more exposition on thoughts to oneself about what just happened or about to happen. I definitely liked it ! |
| 2005-03-24 13:59:02 |
Janet in Training 01
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wow, I have never been a slave but my boyfriend is into bondage and told me I would be his slave. This is a touching story, |