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Comments from READER
| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-07-13 00:23:47 | The Wedding Crashers | I don't really know what to say, except, "What in the hell......" |
| 2007-07-13 00:25:19 | The Wedding Crashers | What the hell kind of loser is still a virgin before marriage, but one of those Christian lunatic mutherfuckers. I hate them but liked your story. It was short but good. 7/10. |
| 2007-07-06 09:13:33 | Loving Courtney...revised | Kind Readers, please keep a lookout for 'Loving Courtney...In Her Eyes' coming very soon. I hope you will all be as appreciative of it as you have been of this series. |
| 2007-07-06 16:38:30 | Loving Courtney...revised | I read the first line and that was enough for me. No 16-year old girl is going to walk up to your car and ask for a ride to God knows where. If she is a slut looking for anyone to fuck her, then ok. If she was hitchhiking, then OK. Your opening is poor--I suggest that you have another revision. It's important that even though you stated that it is fantasy, try to make it somewhat believable. No rating since it would be a poor one. |
| 2007-07-07 06:14:11 | Loving Courtney...revised | Dear Reader...please note that this is a work of fiction even though some parts are either based on fact or actually happened as they were described. 'Courtney' and I met exactly as I described in the first paragraph. |