| 2007-07-07 14:53:02 |
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Im not gonna lie, that would piss me off so much!!!! |
| 2007-07-07 18:39:19 |
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Great story. I can see this actually happening. Don't know about the endings--I fully enjoyed the story up until the endings. I just wanted it to be as real as you made it appear by your better than average writing. gave it a 9/10. |
| 2007-07-08 03:24:05 |
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I don't care if he's my best friend or not, having my girlfriend do that to him would piss me off to no end. I can't judge completely fair, because It killed any arousal I had when she started beating him off, so i'll give it an 8/10 simply because from what I read, you have very nice writing skills, which is refreshing. |
| 2007-07-08 06:46:53 |
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"I don't care if he's my best friend or not, having my girlfriend do that to him would piss me off to no end. i can't judge completely fair, because it killed any arousal i had when she started beating him off, so i'll give it an 8/10 simply because from what i read, you have very nice writing skills, which is refreshing."
^ I'm with this guy, the whole girlfriend randomly wanking off the bestfriend ruined it for me :[. |
| 2007-07-08 10:22:27 |
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hahahaha, figures someone on this site would suggest you bring a family member into it. Good story. Fuck all these prude lame-ass commenters. By the way, the word is polyamory, not polygamy -- that's for marriages. |