| 2005-10-28 08:33:27 |
Janet in Training 12
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I have read all stories from start to finish and while I must admit that they were excellent, I also want to point out that you have a few errors in each and every one of them. There are certain times when you used the wrong name for the person you were trying to describe, or you used a word in an incorrect context (i.e. too vs to). But again, loved the story, very well written and it gets a ten in my book |
| 2005-11-02 17:17:54 |
Janet in Training 12
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This was by far the best story I read until now. They kept me wake long into the night, until I finished the reading. You have the rare gift of keeping all your reader atention across the entire time of the story. Please keep writting, though you should try to expand a little the subject of your tales. |
| 2006-01-29 20:38:01 |
Janet in Training 12
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I normally don't read these stories. But this was an intriquing and notable work. thank you for a well written and proper work. I feel I learned something of the life of a Dom, the proper life. Thank you |
| 2006-02-10 07:15:54 |
Janet in Training 12
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i only have one issue with it sex sex sex just call it what it is pussy twat cunt or any other word thats my only complaint other then that it was by far one of the best writen stories i have ever had the pleasure of reading 9/10 |
| 2006-03-01 21:40:09 |
Janet in Training 12
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I have read and re-read all 12 chapters. I am amazed at the style of your writings. real, factual, honest and straight-forward. i love it, even though I seldom read these types of stories. Something caught my interest and it stayed til the end. Enjoyed the story and its make-up. thanks for the work and your time. |