| 2007-07-11 22:50:19 |
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Pretty good. Make sure to check spelling. And 11 inches is actually pretty big.... |
| 2007-07-18 02:22:09 |
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O.o ..the crap! no offence but... how could uyou spell Voldemorts name wrong! OoO! |
| 2007-07-18 08:33:07 |
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I'm sorry, but I have to say that I didn't like it, I admit I like almost all of the Harry fan fic stuff on this site, but this is the worst... Spell checker man, it's not hard at all... But that's not the worst part, I found the sizes to be completely wrong, and the story itself was not exactly badly written, but not all that great either. On the plus side the only way to get better is with practice, so you want my advice? Well I'm gonna give it even if you don't... Try again, listen to what people have to say and keep trying, you can fail forever but keep in mind that you can easily do a lot better too... Well thats enough for me 3/10 |
| 2007-07-25 23:00:07 |
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um,,wow..this sucked..spellcheck,know the story,and etc.. |
| 2007-08-07 11:39:55 |
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emm.. well i dont really know what to say about the actual story, it was a little wired but your spelling and grammer... just BAD. and set and sat are not the same thing!!! |