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| Date | Story title | Comment |
|---|---|---|
| 2007-09-27 19:29:00 | Brothers slave 2-The training | I have not seen the first episode. Now I wont bother! So mant of you socallee "authors' don not know the firstthing about syntax, not to mention proper grammar and spelling. Did you ever hear of proofreading an article before submisson |
| 2007-09-28 07:08:40 | Brothers slave 2-The training | thanksgiving puzzles word search |
| 2007-10-07 23:20:47 | Brothers slave 2-The training | 9/27 spellcheck dumbass good storie DONT take a year to write again dam part2 took forever 9/10 |
| 2007-11-09 23:15:59 | Brothers slave 2-The training | That was good and could've been better if u used spellcheck. That thing works on ur cpu, use it next time. Other than that it was good. U should write the sequeal but just use spellcheck this tim. |
| 2007-12-06 23:22:11 | Brothers slave 2-The training | yes just one more I think you are the best yet....I am JUSTSUCK |